Goddamn Not an Angel When I Die

So, here a little piece of nastiness I vomited up at work the other night.  i felt like i have to put hits down on paper to exorcise it from my brain.

This was inspired by 'dethvengeance',  jatise little story , and part HOSTEL, and part 'Silence Of The Lambs' 

So here’s the current demon in my brain, feel free to help me kill it.

 

Beware! Raw and unformatted work ahead!

 

 

 

Ok guys, here some more rough crap off my hard drive

I want some feed back on this.  Constructive criticism, thoughts, ideas.

PLEASE, NO FANGIRLING!    I want your real thought and ideas. 

Sadpandamidi wanted to see this, so I decided to pop it up on LJ cuz you guys are really good at   throwing advice and encouragement to me.

So I’m glad she gave me a nug in the butt on this.  This thing been sitting as a shortcuts staring at me for a few months.

 

 

 

WHO SAY METAL AIN'T SLASHY!!!!


Bend down, I command you
turn your face away from me
your face means nothing to me
bend down

A human on all fours
I take him on a walk
ambling along the corridor
I am disappointed

Now he comes backwards towards me
Honey stays stuck on the garter
I am disappointed, totally disappointed

Bend down
your face doesn't interest me

The human has bent down
and moved into a good light
I show him what you can do
and I start to cry

The human stammers a prayer
out of fear because it goes worse for me
he tries to bend down even more
tears run up the back

Bend down

Bend down, I command you
turn your face away from me
your face means nothing to me
bend down once more

Bend down

 

 

no title promo before transformers movie

link takes you youtube, but it's worth it

watch it now, it might get taken down.
paramount trying to keeps trailers from leaking out.

ah....cute little Swedish boy goodness!

I'm having mad love for this song and this band.
they're kinda unknown, so i thought I'd share this with you all!
enjoy!
this video cracks me up!

ok, still brain storming, and you all are my victims!
wacth the video first, the read the text part.
i want you to hear the music that's kinda being my inspiration for this




À Tout Le Monde by Megadeth

 

 

Over on SF, there was a thread started about Fics we started and might not ever finish

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Sooooo, I decided to post this little piece of a fic I scratched out at the end of another piece.

I have no clue as to when I wrote this….

Tell me if you like to see more of this.

If you do, I’m warning you right now, it’ll be weird and twisted.

(more at the end)

 BTW, is anyone else as geeked for the TransFormers movie coming out as i am???

my friends are worried about me!

 

i love this one. it flowed so fast, and so easy.  i think i busted out the first part in less than 20 minutes, and did very few revisions after that.

good luck keeping up with what the hell is going on around here!

The prose on this one is a little different than the last one.  Since I did this one from Nathan POV, it’s set up different.  It’s not that I think Nathan is a dumb guy, I just thin he one of those ‘short sentence structure’ kind of guys.  Not a person that has long, deep internal monologues.  He says what he need to say, without over explaining himself. (Unlike me!)

And Microsoft word still hates me!  Sorry if I missed any errors.

 

 

 

 

 

FINALLY!  Part 3 is done!  Only a week later than I hoped.  Had an eye doctor appoint last Saturday, and the sadistic bastard dilated my eyes, I was fucked up all weekend.  You don’t to that shit to a light sensitive freak like me!  (My husband complains that why I get along so well with cats, none of us need any lights on in the house to see where we’re going)

But any ways....

 

i thought it was funny!

 

HEY, there you all are!

Lira’s coming outta the grips of a viscous post Easter PEEPS addiction, so the whole writing thing been craze and multi tasky.

(The Walgreens near me had them @ .12 a box!!!!  Crack aint that cheap!!!  )

I didn’t think this story was going to happen, but I got such good reaction to the first part, that kinda fuel me to hit it again.

And the fact I left enough open questions that it bugged me!

 

 

really, i am working on some new stuff!
hope to have it up on sunday

ok...LJ need to allow bigger post!  i cannot be brief!

LJ either needs to let me post bigger stuff, or i need to learn how to be brief or write in small chapters!

so, since i'd promised to re-post the stuff i put on SF, here's the first story i wrote for that board.